Thursday, November 5, 2009

To Chicago...

Well... not really... I just got a copy of the Road to Perdition soundtrack and Road to Chicago is my favorite track so far. Today's pic of the day is the abandoned back lot i have to cross to get to our employee parking lot. You can see the small opening we have to cross through under the hut to get in and out. Its horrible at night, can't see your nose in front of your face... or even your own shadow.

I was trying to post with other images but for some reason (aside from forgetting Blogspots web addy) I couldn't post images or really anything at all.

Second edit isn't going as well as planned. Due to work and having to aid Rae in helping her sister/bro in law move... there hasn't been much time to edit. We've gotten up to chapter 3 (which is horrid as time goes) but I still think we need to start writing letters to literary agents. Wanted to get more editing done before then but.... Time... it's too fleeting, not to mention the sooner that happens the sooner some fresh eyes might get a chance to look the novel over and tell me what else is wrong.
This month is NANOWRIMO and as much as I wanted to get book 2 started (or even a new story) I know if I tried Book 1 would be forgotten. So with my attention there and my mind back into the swing of things (job wise- they changed my hours so my schedule was really off for a while) I'm going to try getting more work done in making preparations for book 2 and hope we get more book 1 chapter editing done.

until next time...

always carry a flash light.

Friday, October 9, 2009

The Green House

Camera phone pic so its not of the best quality, but that aside... this is one of the sights I see every morning walking from our employee lot to the main building... have to walk through an abandoned store lot and through a run down green house to get there. When the empty lot was filled with Clunkers it really had that "end of days" feel to it.

So... Novel update. I will make this breif because I want to get to bed >_<

FIRST FULL EDIT COMPLETE (a day behind my planned schedual but there were issues that needed tending to first)

With a total of 88 chapters + a pro & epilogue, it runs 533 pages with a total of 317,499 words (wow... that really doesnt seem like much at all O_O )

Now I must think of my pitch (like what it would say on the back cover to attract readers) and make up a letter to a Literary Agent.

yes a new tip to all:

Look into finding a literary agent, there are alot of books and blogs on the proper procedures.

wish me luck!

Sunday, September 27, 2009

Proof is in the pudding...

...Just goes to show how much I need to clean my window....
Ps: Not my cat, its a stray that's trying to make its home under the hood of my car... little bugger.

ok... so Pudding.... as much as I enjoy the stuff.... I think i may be allergic to it O_O last few times I've eaten it I've had some sort of reaction, usually a bad burning in my throat... does this happen to anyone else?

aside from that... We're nearly done with First full edit of JBtM. *cheers* but there's still a long way to go. Tried to get some editing done last night but got too distracted by Rae who made me watch the Green Mile... twice (it was shown twice on Bravo network last night so... we watched it instead of editing) She does love that movie *shrugs*

and today... well I had one of those "creative" dreams last night so I spent the entire morning writing down what I remembered from the dream -by hand cause i was too lazy to turn on the computer- and now I'm working more on the idea.... I think theres a possibility that I can link it to another dream I had and then make it's plot based on a RPG I once tried to start but got no where with (no one seemed interested in the idea, bah)

Could it be a possibility for after I finish the J series? we shall see... I will have plenty of time to work on it as a side project as I continue the J series. It seems it might be similar to parts of the J series... so I might even work it into that.... but again... in time... I will see.

Untill next time... Beware the watching kitties...

Sunday, September 13, 2009

Novacane...

Meet 87... or 93... while everyone at work is getting big ol' flat screens... I get this lovely peice of junk... You can't really see it but... i did a little omage to LOST there... only when I hit execute... the computer froze and died for a minute... yet here it is... still kickin'.

This week I finished reading "City of Ember" and will be moving on to the second book. The first kinda just leaves off so... I must know what happens next O_O it feels a little strange to know all the books I own (discounting maybe three of them) come from the kids section... not even young adult I mean.. kiddy kids with the colorful section stuck in a corner away from all the "adult" books. Not that I'm saying that's bad or anything... man... I love kids books! They have so much imagination and can deal with adult topics in an understandible way... and now that I think about it... what really sets these books apart? Is it just the wording? The age of the characters? I don't really understand, but I shrug it off and smile with joy for I have another book I can add to my tiny little book/ dvd shelf. I'm running out of space >_<

As for writing updates... there aren't many. It has been a few, very tiresome, weeks so Rae and I are taking advantage of the fact its the weekend and I have finished both a book and a kids show (huntik: secrets and seekers <--- its italian! -reveiw for this perhaps another time) to edit. I cross my fingers and hope we atleast finsh another chapter by the end of monday (my day off) before I return to the energy drainer that is my job.

Saturday, September 5, 2009

A toll...

Today's image is just a random one... not sure if that's supposed to be a rocket ship or a flying squid but I was compelled to take the picture anyway.

None the less, this was my first week working every single day, monday- Saturday till closing... and well... I'm exausted. If its not crazy customers, it's crazy office equipment, or crazy smells that make me feel ill by the time we close... todays wretched scent was burning butter from the popcorn maker in the hall next to ours. And I have to admit, working saturdays is a bit maddening.

Luckily monday is labor day so I have an extra day off -next to sunday- so... keeping my fingers crossed... Rae and I will get some work done on editing. Not too much longer now... but I think I will feel much better if we get it done before my set goal.

for a while I managed to get a little editing done before work and during, if I swiftly read over a ch and took notes on what needed to be fixed/ changed on scrap paper when no one was looking but at this point I think my brain's pretty tapped out. It's the follow up to the denoument so its more simplistic in style and though I would really like to think more on book 2 now, the end to book 1 seems more important (though i still am taking down ideas and notes as they come to me, even if it is something small and unimportant)
Our computers at work are also censored so if there is any downtime there is very little I can do to keep myself busy/ inspired/entertained. Though I dont think bringing my work from home would be a wise idea, even if I only did it during my break. So instead I've been bringing a chapter book with me and when I get the chance (during my lunch break or dead closing hours) I catch up on reading. I've been told by many novelists/ writers that its a good thing to keep doing, read read read. and I do LOVE to read... its just that I usually find it hard to, well, find something i can sink my brains teeth into.

Presently I am reading "The City of Ember: the first Book of Ember" by Jeanne DuPrau. I never knew it was a book until I rented the movie and you know... usually I don't like film adaptations of books... especially with child actors but I have to say... I really did enjoy the film (granted I wouldn't have paid the steep theater fee's to see it) but for a rental I was very pleased. of course things have to be taken with a grain of salt since hollywood tends to change storylines or leave out certain details from the original write, which was obviously done in Ember's case, but that is what got me to want to read the book, to know what was missing in those places throughout the film that felt so empty. I'm glad I did and so far I'm not disapointed. I'm about half way through now and not sure if I will continue the series or move on to other first volumes I have sitting on my shelf, i think i'll be able to tell once i get to the final chapters.

if ever there was a film based on my novel... I know what I would want to change already, along with some actors I would like to portray my characters... but that's probably along way away... but then again... it gives me some hope... and something to think about.

Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Kiddies... don't try this at home...

Pidgeon's.... know too little... or too much

heh, another pic from the city... cant go anywhere without seeing one of these guys... stoped at a vendor and a courageous... or maybe really stupid pidge was sneaking around, then the morons infront of us tried to step on it. *shakes head*

speaking of intelligence... I must share an occurance from work today. I was half asleep... if not completely... but this woke me up nice. One of my co workers decided that popping a pressurized water bottle would be a funny thing to do... so he took the plastic container and crushed it untill the cap popped off, now... outside maybe it would have been cool, but inside where there are people constantly rushing about, he should have used better disgression. So... rather than smacking some one in the head (im not really sure why he did it or what his goal was) he ended up shattering one of the light fixtures over my station... showering bits of glass down upon myself and another coworker of mine (she getting the worst of it).

The sound was loud and got the whole department scrambling to find out who got "shot" while none of the customers seemed to care and went about their business (i think maybe one or two peeked in to see and make sure no one was hurt) and luckily no one was but it certainly was an eye opener. (later some one commented that they were surprised no one screamed, honestly I'm surprised i didn't start laughing out of nervousness -i tend to do that- and what surprised me even more were the words that I first spat out "Are you okay?!" as i backed into the corner to get as far away as I could.

once clean up began I did end up laughing, leaning my head against the wall wondering what I would have done had my co worker and I been in eachothers places.

it only took a few seconds to happen but I don't think I will forget this for a while, especially since there is no longer a light above our station.

in other less amusing news- I got to see district 9, had a little bit of everything... well maybe not comedy unless you count the pig tossing at the end, but I enjoyed it, sadly I can't say the same for those I saw it with. aaaand... still editing but we've gotten to chapter 80, and off track once more. just gotta keep trying new things to see what fits best in the given scenario.

Tuesday, August 18, 2009

500


Another pic from my city tour trip. It reminded me of a white castle (fast food) so I took the picture. Hahah great reason right? (looking at it now, it kinda reminds me of one the castles from the novel, mostly in color really)
Anyway... Just thought I'd proclaim that JBTM has officially reached 500 pages. Granted Rae and I are still editing... but I somehow doubt that the page count will go down from here less an entire chapter is removed.
that's about all for today. I'm pretty tired but I rewrote a chunck of the current chapter I'm working on today at work and I feel that atleast part should be substituted tonight.
untill next time.